Friday, September 25, 2009

Parallel Sequencing

Both the paragraphs talk about work from the mother and the father. The paragraphs also talk about the things they use like how they are in their reach. And also how they look more interested in what they are doing than what is around them.
The second example of paragraphs talk about the difference of the relationship between the writer and his parents. Like how their relationship is kind of serious with his parents.
The third example of paragraphs talk about what the writer does and feels during his weekend.
Like in the first paragraph the writer sounds happy, cheerful and full of life. Also it also shows the way he acts on his saturday. But in the second paragraph it talks about the next day which is sunday. Like when he gets woken up by his mom so he could do some work around the house. But there are some similarities like the words he uses to describe how he feels and how he feels about the days.
My mom is different from my dad.
My mom is always there for us. She's always around the house for anything we need. She is always doing stuff around the house, but we help some of the time. She is always trying to give us the best she can. But then until my mother leaves to work then we wait for my dad.
My dad is almost never around the house. He works almost all the time except for the two days he gets off from work. But he never almost hangs around with us because he is always too tired. But we try to make the best out of it when he is there. He only tells us good night every night before we go to sleep and thats the only thing we hear from him that night.

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